Monday, February 23, 2009

Ro Rosa

Chapter1



Her mother sick






one upon atime there have one children name Rosa but her Lastname is Ro. she is the poor girl. and she try to work and her house is do by the stick. and one Sunday she go to the market and she want to buy something to eat. but she didn't have a money and she saw some one was drop the money. and she take it to him but he is not take and he give a money more to her and he is very kind to her "You are so kind to me thank you to give me a money"Rosa said, "It OK"he said to Rosa,"Bye Bye she you again"Rosa said "Bye Bye she you again too"he said and then she buy some food to her morther to eat. When she go to her house. she tell her mom "I saw some one was very kind to me, wow I forgot to ask his name" rosa said. and on monday hermother go to find the wood to sell. and In one day to one day her morther always selling the stick. one morning when her mother selling the stick is and when she selling he stick is gone and then when she walk she was faint. and then she saw her mother like this she was cry. and then she take her mother to her house to look after her. and then she didn't let her mother go to selling. when she selling aready she buy some medicine and food. when she go to her home she do some cooking to her morther and when her morther eating aready she let her morther to eat medicine. oneday to oneday her mother always eat medicine and she was better better. and then when her morther wasn't sick she really happy when her mother didn't sick again.




2 comments:

  1. Leakena,

    You're quite an author these days! Cool!

    This is a great story. It has what we call a "moral" - your story teaches me to be kind to others. Even though Rosa didn't have much money, she decided to give the stranger his money back, but he let her keep it. I wonder will the stranger come back in the story later? Maybe he will repay her kind act?

    Can't wait to read what comes next!
    -Teacher Robbie

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